Comment by Ken

Ken — Wed, 13 Apr 2005 18:13:57 +0000

You're very sweet, MonoCerdo. :)

Comment by MonoCerdo (Guest)

MonoCerdo (Guest) — Wed, 13 Apr 2005 12:15:49 +0000

Thanks for posting the story. Establishing mood can be challenging in a short work, but you really did a nice job of turning the tables on your narrator by the end, leaving him in a position we've all probably been in once or twice. I agree with Jen that the last line is particularly strong. Hats off to the Great American Blog.

-an adoring fan

Creative Writing 101

Ken — Tue, 12 Apr 2005 22:56:22 +0000

By request, I've posted a story I wrote ten years ago.